You seemed to like the word substitutions I suggested in “Word and phrase substitutions for economical writers.” This post suggests more changes to make your writing more economical and reader-friendly.
In most cases, making your writing more concise makes it easier for readers to absorb your message.
Existing research shows → Research shows
—After all, it should be clear from the context that you’re not discussing imaginary or future research.
In large part → Largely
Are disruptive to → Disrupt
Client types → Clients
Makes you distinct from → Distinguishes you from
Are presented with → Face
Are growing their use of → Increasingly use
Be reflective of → Reflect
Be responsive to → Respond to
Have a negative impact on → Hurt
Is in a position to → Is positioned to
Make a choice → Choose
There appear to be some signs → There are signs