Nov. newsletter: Fewer or less?

Happy Thanksgiving to my U.S. readers! I hope you enjoy a nice holiday later this month.

Fewer versus less

Which should you use—“fewer” or “less”? The Merriam-Webster Dictionary explains the rule clearly:

Generally, fewer is used when a number of things can be counted (“fewer problems”) and less is used when an amount is measured (“less trouble” or “less time”).

Of course, there are exceptions that complicate things. For more insights into the topic of fewer versus less, see

Medicare open enrollment

With Medicare open enrollment in process, it’s a good time to remind your clients about SHIP, the free, unbiased Medicare insurance counseling service.

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Avoid the taint of AI

Find some helpful tips on how to avoid publishing content that reads like it has been written using generative artificial intelligence (AI). Read “How to Edit the AI-isms Out of Your Content (No Detectors Needed)” on the Contently blog.

I especially like the tips to “Insert local or unique details” and “Increase use of expert quotes or original input.”

The article cites one sign of AI intervention that doesn’t apply to investment and wealth management content. It warns against hedging language, “terms or phrases that weaken the assertiveness of a statement and make it less absolute.” If you’ve worked in financial services for a while, you know that your compliance professionals love hedging language. It does protect you and your readers.

 

Winslow Homer at the MFA

Check out the beautiful exhibit of Winslow Homer watercolors at the Boston Museum of Fine Arts. It runs until Jan. 19, 2026.

Winslow Homer in Watercolor exhibit at Boston Museum of Fine Arts

Winslow Homer exhibit at the Boston Museum of Fine Arts

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MISTAKE MONDAY for May 26: Can YOU spot what’s wrong?

Can you spot what’s wrong in the image below? Please post your answer as a comment.

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Want a clue to this week’s big mistake? Read my post on “Bloggers’ top two punctuation mistakes.” It doesn’t discuss this exact mistake, but it’ll point you in the right direction.

I post these challenges to raise awareness of the importance of proofreading. I make mistakes, too. Mistake Monday keeps me vigilant. After all, I don’t want to make any more mistakes worthy of posting here.

MISTAKE MONDAY for April 28: Can YOU spot what’s wrong?

Can you spot what’s wrong in the image below? Please post your answer as a comment.

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Once again, here’s an error in a major newspaper. I suspect that text, such as headlines and captions, that isn’t written by the reporter may be particularly prone to becoming fodder for Mistake Monday. Do YOU have a theory explaining these errors?

I post these challenges to raise awareness of the importance of proofreading. I still struggle with proofreading my own work.

MISTAKE MONDAY for October 28: Can YOU spot what’s wrong?

Can you spot what’s wrong in the image below? Please post your answer as a comment. I hate spotting mistakes like this.

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I post these challenges to raise awareness of the importance of proofreading.

MISTAKE MONDAY for September 30: Can YOU spot what’s wrong?

Can you spot what’s wrong in the image below? Please post your answer as a comment. This is another common error.

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I post these challenges to raise awareness of the importance of proofreading.

MISTAKE MONDAY for August 26: Can YOU spot what’s wrong?

Can you spot what’s wrong in the image below? Please post your answer as a comment. I wonder if the author dictated their text.

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I post these challenges to raise awareness of the importance of proofreading.

MISTAKE MONDAY for July 29: Can YOU spot what’s wrong?

Can you spot what’s wrong in the image below? Please post your answer as a comment. I’m embarrassed to say that this was my own typo. I started Mistake Monday to encourage myself to proofread more carefully.

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I post these challenges to raise awareness of the importance of proofreading.

“All” versus “all of”

I’m a little obsessive about proper usage, but there are plenty of holes in my knowledge of writing style. Thus, when I saw “all our funds,” it drove me to the internet to see if that should read “all of our funds.” My first observation: this seems to be a question mainly for English language learners. There don’t appear to be many established grammar or style gurus writing online about this topic.

Use “all of” only with pronouns, says Grammar Monster

Grammar Monster says to use “all”—instead of “all of”—before any noun except a pronoun. For example, “all of us,” but “all the cheese.” In a sidebar, it says that “all of” is an indefinite pronoun, but “all” is an “indefinite adjective.” How’s that for a bit of grammar trivia?

Garner’s agrees

Although I follow Grammar Monster on Twitter, the site isn’t one of my regular go-to resources. So, I delved into my trusty Garner’s Modern American Usage. Garner says that “all” is more formal than “all of.” He says one should use “all of” only before a pronoun—agreeing with Grammar Monster—or when a possessive noun follows, as in “Beyond all of Jones’ ego-stroking maneuvers.”

That’s all for now on my latest research.

 

Note: This post was updated on July 12, 2024.

MISTAKE MONDAY for April 29: Can YOU spot what’s wrong?

Can you spot what’s wrong in the image below? Please post your answer as a comment. This example has more than one mistake.

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I post these challenges to raise awareness of the importance of proofreading.

MISTAKE MONDAY for March 25: Can YOU spot what’s wrong?

Can you spot what’s wrong in the image below? Please post your answer as a comment. This mistake is far too common in communications that I read.

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I post these challenges to raise awareness of the importance of proofreading.