Mistake Monday

MISTAKE MONDAY for July 22: Can YOU spot what’s wrong?

Can you spot what’s wrong in the image below? Please post your answer as a comment.

There’s one obvious mistakes, plus some other weaknesses.


MM logisics logistics






I post these challenges to raise awareness of the importance of proofreading.

2 replies
  1. Polly
    Polly says:

    It’s awkwardly written. Seems to be a missing link. Comma atrocities. Paragraph combines topics that should stand alone. S’all I got.

  2. Susan Weiner, CFA
    Susan Weiner, CFA says:


    Thank you for taking the time to read and comment! This is indeed a poorly written paragraph.

    Another thing I noticed is the misspelling of logistics, which is missing a T.

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