Mistake Monday

MISTAKE MONDAY for April 16: Can YOU spot what’s wrong?

Can you spot what’s wrong in the image below? Please post your answer as a comment.

 inquires inquiries

I post these challenges to raise awareness of the importance of proofreading.

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  1. Susan Weiner, CFA
    Susan Weiner, CFA says:

    Thanks for your participation, Andy!

    As Andy pointed out, the text should use “inquiries” instead of “inquires.” I think that’s the mistake that drew my eye to this week’s Mistake Monday item.

    Some other issues:
    * “High quality” with quotation marks suggests the inquiries are not really high quality.
    * The second sentence needs a period.
    * Random capitalization

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