Mistake Monday

MISTAKE MONDAY for Jul. 16: Can YOU spot what’s wrong?

Can you spot what’s wrong in the image below? Please post your answer as a comment. If you can’t find what’s wrong with this, then try my read-out-loud technique.

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I post these challenges to raise awareness of the importance of proofreading.

2 replies
  1. Lisa Plotnick
    Lisa Plotnick says:

    I admit it took me two reads until I noticed the issue. It’s much harder to catch missing words than extra words.

  2. Susan Weiner
    Susan Weiner says:

    Thanks for playing, Lisa! Yes, there’s a missing “to.” That’s what caught my eye.

    Another Mistake Monday participant noted there should probably be a comma after “episode.”

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