Mistake Monday

MISTAKE MONDAY for Jul. 2: Can YOU spot what’s wrong?

Can you spot what’s wrong in the image below? Please post your answer as a comment.

I can see how this image might spark strong feelings. For the purpose of Mistake Monday, I’m interested in issues of style, spelling, punctuation, and the like.

who's whose

I post these challenges to raise awareness of the importance of proofreading.

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  1. Susan Weiner, CFA
    Susan Weiner, CFA says:

    A few things are wrong:
    * “Marketing” should be lower case.
    * There should be a comma after the word “standpoint.”
    * “Who’s” should be “whose.”

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