Investment writing challenge for my readers
Change one word in the following line to make it a more effective sentence.
The Standard and Poor’s 500 Index rose and the Barclays Capital Aggregate Bond Index fell.
Post your rewrite in the comments.
I’ve got a writing lesson in mind as I pose this puzzler. I’ll circle back later to explain it, although I wouldn’t be surprised if one of my savvy readers beats me to it.

