
Financial advisors, a media platform can boost your business
I heard good things about Qwoted, a platform that connects reporters…

Fewer subordinates, please
Long subordinate clauses can sap the power of your writing. Make your writing easier to read by moving those long clauses from the beginnings to the ends of your sentences.

MISTAKE MONDAY for November 30: Can YOU spot what’s wrong?
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Go easy on screamers!
Limit your use of exclamation points in your formal business writing. Exclamation points may work better in texts and emails, where you should tailor your use to the recipient.

Increase the sonic force of your writing
Sentences that sound better are likely to read better. Improve their sound by increase their sonic force. Using shorter words and more vowel sounds will increase sonic force, says author Joe Moran.

Writing tight with Trish Hall
Tight writing is reader-friendly. It can also be interesting.

My 2020 reading, with suggestions for you
Looking for something to read—or to buy as a gift for the holidays?…

MISTAKE MONDAY for October 26: Can YOU spot what’s wrong?
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Name your photos effectively for publication
Sending your photo for publication? Make sure you name your file appropriately to increase the likelihood that your photo and your name will appear together in the publication.

Top posts from 2020’s third quarter
Check out my top posts from the third quarter!
They’re a…

8 ways to cut word count and boost your impact!
Cut the word count of your financial writing with 8 tips. 1. Cut paragraphs and sentences. 2. Use Hemingway App. 3. Cut adverbs and adjectives. 4. Substitute simple words for phrases. 5. Replace passive verbs with active ones. 6. Use pronouns. 7. Rethink content. 8. Read the content out loud.

MISTAKE MONDAY for September 28: Can YOU spot what’s wrong?
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The Cloze test for readability
The Cloze test for readability

Pick your corner as a writer!
William Zinsser, a revered writing expert, said the following…

Focus on WIIFM, not the article
Nobody gets excited about reading an article. That’s the thought…

Blog like a mangrove
A mangrove thrives because its roots filter out salt from the…

MISTAKE MONDAY for August 31: Can YOU spot what’s wrong?
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Tips for writing book reviews
5 tips for writing nonfiction book reviews. 1. Give essentials; 2. say why book is worth reading; 3. use quotations; 4. bring in personal experience; 5. be critical but not unkind.
